Very well done on Draft 2! And thank you for keeping us updated along the way.I'm curious who you select to read your work along with you – friends, family, perfect strangers?Is it hard for them to be brutally honest?
I have responded through the cunning use of a follow-up post: http://www.gamboling.co.uk/2009/10/who-edits-editors.html
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Very well done on Draft 2! And thank you for keeping us updated along the way.I'm curious who you select to read your work along with you – friends, family, perfect strangers?Is it hard for them to be brutally honest?
I have responded through the cunning use of a follow-up post: http://www.gamboling.co.uk/2009/10/who-edits-editors.html